Short Story: A Corruptive Influence

En un trágico giro de acontecimientos, Hetty mata por error a su esposo Torrance mientras cree que está siendo perseguida por criminales. Mientras lidia con el impacto, descubre que Torrance lo había orquestado todo como una sorpresa por su aniversario.

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Torrance and Hetty had a tradition. In fact, the couple had many traditions. That’s because they’d been married for a very long time.

They were driving home from San Diego, where they’d visited the restaurant where they would celebrate their fortieth wedding anniversary later that month. It would be a nice celebration, with family and friends. However, Hetty wished they could celebrate in style, do something extravagant, go on the cruise she’d always wanted to go on. But she knew they couldn’t afford that.

Every time the couple drove home from San Diego, they stopped at an abandoned property that Torrance’s family owned to go for a walk. And this time was no exception. As they walked around the property, Torrance stopped to pick an avocado from a tree. It was then that Hetty saw it: a bag at the tree’s base.

“What’s that?” she asked, retrieving it. She opened the bag and for a moment, she couldn’t believe what she was seeing. It was money. A lot of money. 

“We can’t keep it,” Torrance insisted, as he and Hetty drove home. “It’s against the law.”

“It’s a stupid law that nobody knows about or obeys,” said Hetty. She had looked it up on her phone and discovered that in California, anyone who found money, even a few cents, was obliged to try to return it to its owner. 

“Well, we know about it,” said Torrance, “and now there’s proof that we know about it on your phone. Besides, someone knows about the money, and when they find out it’s gone, they’ll start searching for it.”

“They’ll never know we found it. Nobody will ever know.”

Hetty knew the real problem wasn’t that the money wasn’t theirs. It was that Torrance believed money had a corruptive influence. He always said it was the root of all evil, while she believed it was the root of all happiness. It was one of the few things they passionately disagreed on. 

In the end, Hetty convinced Torrance to keep the money, at least for now. They would bury it in the garden, and if anyone came for it, they would return it to them. 

Everything was OK for a while, but then Hetty began to feel paranoid. Whenever she went out, she felt that someone was following her. 

It got so bad that she bought a gun, and began going to a shooting range. She didn’t tell Torrance about it. She couldn’t tell him. He hated guns, and she had always hated guns too. But now she needed a gun, for protection. 

The people who owned the money were certainly criminals  — because who else left money on an abandoned property? And if someone really was following her, it must be a criminal, a criminal who knew she and Torrance had the money, and so they were both in a perilous situation.

It was the evening before the couple’s fortieth wedding anniversary. Torrance had already bought Hetty a present, which she was to open the next day. But Hetty had been so distracted over the money that she hadn’t bought a present for him. So she went out to get him a box of his favorite cigars

As she walked to the cigar shop, she again felt that someone was following her. And as she walked home, she heard footsteps behind her. She clutched the gun, which was in her bag, and walked more quickly. 

When she arrived home, she called Torrance’s name but there was no response. The door opened behind her and she retrieved her gun, turned around and fired it. The person behind her fell on the ground, dead. It was Torrance.

Torrance? How could it be Torrance? Why had Torrance been following her? Had he been plotting against her? He’d always said that money had a corruptive influence. What if it had had a corruptive influence on him? 

Hetty’s first instinct was to call the police, but what if they didn’t believe that it was an accident? What if she went to prison? Then the money would remain buried in the garden forever.

No, she’d make it appear like a home invasion: she’d come home and found Torrance dead. She buried her gun in the garden with the money, and then called the police.

A few hours later, Hetty was at the police station. It was easy to present herself as a grieving widow because she was a grieving widow. She had loved Torrance. She hadn’t intended to kill him. But at least she had the money, and now that she knew that her husband, and not a criminal, had been following her, she could finally enjoy it. That was some consolation. 

“We found this at your home,” said the police officer, and presented a DVD. It had been Torrance’s present to her. He inserted it into a computer and Torrance appeared. As he talked, Hetty felt the world spin

“Happy anniversary, my beautiful wife,” he began, and then apologised for following her. “I’m a terrible man, really, but after forty years of marriage, I thought it was time to resolve our disagreement over money, to discover if it really was the root of evil or happiness.” 

Torrance explained that he had recently inherited and sold his family’s abandoned property. “That money buried in the garden is ours, and there’s a lot more of it. I’ve concluded that we’re both right. Money might have corrupted my pacifist wife, by causing her to buy a gun, but it will make her happy too. I’ve bought two tickets for that cruise you’ve always wanted to go on. Surprise!”

Then there was another surprise for Hetty, as the officer presented the money, retrieved from the garden, and the gun she had used to kill her loving husband.

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Este artículo pertenece al número de Febrero 2023 de la revista Speak Up.

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